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PostPosted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 1:30 pm    Post subject: Fiction Stories Reply with quote

ok, i thought we do some fiction stories. Heres one ive. Its called


Hide & Go Seek

Part 1

Lou Lou: Mark! i cant believe, its u, Mark. *faints.*

Mark: here we go again *dumps water on Lou Lou's Body.*

Lou Lou: *startled by the cold water. Gets up. Hug & Kiss Mark.

Mark: *Hugs her back & kisses her back*

Lou Lou: *faints again*

Mark: *slap his hand 2 his forehead.* oh great. im all out of water, How can i save this young lady?

Xavier: (Donnie's First Son.) Uncle Mark, Dump her in the pool. she'll be refreshed & alert.

Mark: Good idea, Xavier. *picks her up & carried her by the pool & dump her in the pool.*

Lou Lou: *was drop into the pool & woke up by the cold.warm water. Reach up for the surface.* Hey Mark, why dont u join me in this nice pool.

Mark: No, i couldnt it. i dont have bathing suit.

Lou Lou: Neither do I. but im still wearing my clothes. *motining Xavier 2 push his uncle in the pool.*

Xavier: *sneak behind his uncle & push him into the pool.*

Mark: *splash. Falls into the pool & comes out of the surface.* Xavier Alexander Wahlberg, that wasnt nice. im going 2 tell ur dad, on u.

Xavuier: *Does flip in the air & landed into the pool.* No u wouldnt. Uncle Mark.

Mark: Yes, i'll

Lou Lou: Well, if u tell Donnie, about Xavier. I'll tell him about u droping me into the pool.

Mark: u' wouldnt even dare.

Lou Lou: yep, Ill go tell him right now.

Donnie: Tell me about what?

Lou Lou: Mark, drop me in the pool.

Donnie: Mark, that wasnt nice.

Mark: *pointing @ Lou Lou.* She fainted.*

Lou Lou: I couldnt help it. he's so sexy & dreamy.

Donnie: What About Me?

Xavier: Dad, ur married.

Lou Lou: Yep, ur sexy & Dreamy, 2. Donnie

Mark: *swims towards the edge of the pool. where Donnie was standing by the edge of the pool. Pulling Donnie in the pool.*

Donnie: *falls forward into the pool. Swim up 2 surface & tackles Mark.*

Mark: *swims away & gets out of the water. running*

Xavier: No running around the pool, Uncle.

Lou Lou: MW Vs DW whos going 2 win.

Donnie: Me, cause im older than him. *gets out of the pool & start chasing Mark around the pool.*

Mark: *open the gate & runs pass the courtyard inside the hotel. Runs by the vending machine, turns left & push the elevator door open. Waits for a few seconds & enter the elevator doorway. push the 3rd floor.*

Donnie: *follows Mark.*

Lou Lou: Come On, Xavier, lets follow them. this is fun. *follows Donnie.*

Xavier: ok. *Follows Lou Lou.*


Mark: reaches the 3rd floor & runs down the hallway & knock on the room, 311. (In a lady voice.) Housekeeping.

Man: *opens the door & saw Mark standing there.

Mark: *dash into the room & hid in the bathroom.*

Donnie: *gets off the elevator & start looking around.*

Lou Lou & Xavier gets off the elevator, a few mins behind Donnie.*

Lou Lou: Wheres Mark?

Donnie: idk how many floor does this have?

Lou Lou: 4

Xavier: but on the elevator over there. it said 3.

Lou Lou: yes, i know that. but if u go down that hallway, a lit bit further. u'll see 2 elevators & that elevator goes up the 4 floor & goes 2 the fun center, 2. F for Fun.

Xavier: great, this is a big place & theirs so many rooms.

Donnie: Lets split up. he can be anywhere in this hotel.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 11:31 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

omg its so cute lol i luv it great job
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 1:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thank u, ranie. ill do part 2 later ive 2 think of what happens next my brain is all going crazy.
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol ok hunny
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 7:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh god! we had a post about this awhile ago... someone wanted to start a fiction story post... and from what i recall most people were against it idk... its just sum seems alittle weird....

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